another goodbrief
i forgot to screenshot the design brief, but the client sell greek desserts, and made by best chef, company color is blue, and want old-fashioned design, but still approachable, thats all i could remember
if you guys have the time to check the designs, and give me advice or critics, or anything, it would be appreciated, thanks a lot pardon my english :)
Edit : i use GIMP and InkScape
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Definitely use the photo, can't tell worth shit what the texture of the dessert was in the first example.
The blueprint style is cool in the first and second examples; third has too much negative space, text doesn't seem anchored. That can be fixed by adding a border around the whole frame or some horizontal rules. If you do go with the style in the first two, tighten up the ruling and margins on the text; pick an orientation and stick with it.
Great start, good concept, good luck!
, yeah sure the texture is kinda confusing. im still figuring out how to make a good outline blueprint style with the photos, lol my bad,
and sorry, for the negative space, do you mean lot of empty space?
and i absolutely taking notes from yoir critics, thank you so much :)
sorry for my bad english