@TheMightyCanuck @Doctor_Spork excuse me please use his full name of Richard Cannon

@Geek_King @antaymonkey I think the pacing problems come from the structure of small chapters; it doesn’t seem quite sure whether it wants to be a single, overarching narative or a collection of little vignettes, and it ends up being the worst of both worlds. Agree about Szeras though, he was by far the most interesting bit so I do hope he ends up actually doing something.

Also like 80% sure the Guardswoman is imaginary and the Sister’s actually alone, Tyler Durden-style

@SpiceMerchant @warhammer40k The Dozr always looks like he’s just having a great time