Bpoetry·PoetrybyBonesOfTheMoon Katie Donovan, "Needle". (Kind of an upsetting one FYI).View original on lemmy.world21Comments3
Coelacanth feddit.nu2Hide 2 repliesNot my favourite overall even though it does tug the heart strings. But I have to say finicky/fixed on me is a great slant rhyme.4
BBonesOfTheMoon replylemmy.world1Hide 1 replyI agree. Today is the one year anniversary of me losing my old dog so this one got to me today, but it's not the best. Still great rhyme.2
Not my favourite overall even though it does tug the heart strings. But I have to say finicky/fixed on me is a great slant rhyme.
I agree. Today is the one year anniversary of me losing my old dog so this one got to me today, but it's not the best. Still great rhyme.
I'm so sorry for your loss.