Spyke

Everyone's favorite guessing game: Why am I blacking out this time?

Have I had enough salt today? Water? Maybe not enough sleep? Am I anemic again?

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lemmy.world

It doesn't scan. But it's not bothering me. Nope not at all. Not in any way annoyed by the fact that there's one too many syllables in the second verse line. Only a complete pedant would get HUNG UP ON THAT RIGHT HAHAHAHAHA

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lemmy.world

Second line. The whole thing is an excerpt of the first verse. The chorus isn't for another couple lines.

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I was actually wondering about that but was too lazy to check. Thanks for the correction

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Zwiebelreply
feddit.org

You can cope with that by dropping a syllable, like "t'fast"

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Yeah, it could be rephrased a little as well, like "guess I stood up too fast again"

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You reached the end