Yeah, when I was drafting the template for this I envisioned reading it as more of a slideshow. I don't know why I did that, and so it does end up pretty compressed.
I might release a revised version of this in a few days--add one more girl, in facial and stomach, to balance things out; move the cumshot descriptions to be sort of a "first tile" in a row, rather than being a top bar; and rearrange some of the girls so there's less clumping (e.g., I didn't mean to give 6-7 lili and madelaine twice, that feels excessive).
It's constructive criticism, I'm not trashing the guy. pretty sure he'd want someone to tell him if it was hard to read. what I said is nothing compared to the constant whining and other crap I have to deal with on the main sub
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Going for creampie with Sydney.
Lucky. Would’ve chosen her if I was tall enough lol
Ahh, man. I get you.
Anal with Rachel
Btw the pics are really tiny and the text is hard to read on mobile. You have a lot of negative space you can fill with bigger text/pics
Also, gotta say, fantastic choice. She's so tight.
Yeah, when I was drafting the template for this I envisioned reading it as more of a slideshow. I don't know why I did that, and so it does end up pretty compressed.
I might release a revised version of this in a few days--add one more girl, in facial and stomach, to balance things out; move the cumshot descriptions to be sort of a "first tile" in a row, rather than being a top bar; and rearrange some of the girls so there's less clumping (e.g., I didn't mean to give 6-7 lili and madelaine twice, that feels excessive).
He’s been using MS Paint for all that, dude. Give some shoutout for whatever we’re getting
It's constructive criticism, I'm not trashing the guy. pretty sure he'd want someone to tell him if it was hard to read. what I said is nothing compared to the constant whining and other crap I have to deal with on the main sub
Ok, got it.
Anal with Rachel