Shadows of Luna II, from my concept album One Year War
It's based on episode 4 of Mobile Suit Gundam. I'm making a concept album that covers the key events of the show/movie trilogy. Volume I, covering the first third, is complete.
https://suno.com/song/dc7472b8-4afe-460d-bd42-94a999f6a64aOpen linkView original on lemmy.sdf.org
Fuckin awful
Do you have any more specific criticisms?
I'm planning to re-record this with real guitar, bass and vocals, so if you can think of ways it might be improved, that would be helpful.
If you're just here to hate that's fine too, but if you have any useful opinions I'm all ears.